Thursday, June 5, 2008

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He Felt great hate for general James Wilkinson, He smelled the odor of wafting gunpowder from the battle at Chrysler's Farm, he heard the popping of guns the roaring of cannon fire and the screaming of dying soldiers, he saw many American and British forces clashing like water and lava. His name is General Wade Hampton of the British Army. He died at the age of eighty four.

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Ms. Sackstein said...
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Ms. Sackstein said...

gpod use of adjectives and details.